Title: Darien's Aim, Serena's Burden Author: Fifi E-mail: fidelia_ho@hotmail.com ICQ #: 19109958 As the title suggests, this story is about the world-famous couple, Darien and Serena. They are both in highschool, same grade, same classes etc. This is a revision of the original piece. I was thinking about it the other day and I really hate how I've written it. So here you go. Until this revision thing is over and when 'I Cannot Believe You' is over, it seems that there will be no new stories for me, people. It would be extremely difficult to write 2 different stories at once. I would get so confused with my own facts that you might find stories exchanging plots and characters! I don't know how some authors can juggle that! It's just amazing! Serena.....age 16 Darien.....age 17 Part 1 (revised) My life as a teenager is the pits! I have to maintain a high average, juggle inbetween various clubs and not only that, but I also have to live with the most annoying person in the world! Darien Chiba. What can I say about him? Well, for one thing, I think we're wasting precious resources on him. You can call me mean and nasty but you just haven't met this guy. Once you have, I assure you. You will harbour the same feelings. On second thought, I find that unlikely. Everyone seems to be unaware of his true self! Darien Chiba is a jock, honor student and class president to put it bluntly. Everyone adores him, wants to be his friend or girlfriend, and wants to make him laugh. It's pathetic! They see him as a leader, a best friend to whom they can turn in search of advice. He's everyone's role model! But why can't they see why I don't like him? I don't hate him. I could never hate anyone. At least I've never known anyone that I could hate. No one has ever done anything that bad to force me to hate him; but Chiba is getting close to crossing that line! He seems so nice to everyone except me. Me, the one whom he teases, pokes fun at, makes fun of, anything derived from that. Ever since elementary to now, grade 11, all he has ever done for me is make my day miserable. Because of him, I'll grow old at a much faster rate, my hair will whiten, and I'll be sour my whole life! I'll never be able to marry, but what's the harm in that? Marrying is something I'm not likely to do. Just another mouth to feed and another pig to clean up after. There you go. That's a perfect example of his influence on me. I'm already complaining like an old lady! I can never find anything right going on with my life, but that's my life in a nutshell. I wonder what people see in him that I don't. Sure, he's cute. No, drop dead gorgeous. His soft facial features make him appear as an angel. Ebony hair, midnight blue eyes, muscularly built. It's enough to drive one crazy with yearning or envy. At least, that's what I've heard. I admit, he's cute, but that's overdoing it. That's enough talk about him. But then, the whole world revolves around him, doesn't it? What a way for the world to end. And we were just starting to develop technology towards its peak. Of course, we're far from that point but closer than before. What has become of this school? What? I'm rambling to you dear people who even care to listen to this pathetic lifeform. So, I'll continue....but for another day. ~end of part 1~ What do you think of this? I think it's much better than the original part, don't you think? Please, tell me what you think. Is this better than the other one? If you haven't read the older one, e-mail me and I can send it to you if you want! Well, here's where I leave. Remember, E-MAIL!!!!