Danielle Devlin All in the hands of fate and destiny-chap 1 'thinking' "taklking" ~~~change scene~~~ place under change scene is where they are I was thinking about and I'm most likely not going to have diffrent points of veiw now.Just third person........ And one small change,I was going to have the girls be twelve then come back later when their fourteen but I don't like that anymore.The girls are fourteen and the boys are sixteen. disclaimers:look in prolouge ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Everyone grew silent when an irritated cough could be herd comming from king Stephen.'We're in for it now' thought Serena as she look at her mother's disaproving gaze.All five girls got in line and bowed their heads in shame.Mina and Lita were still giggiling under their breath."So,this must be the Moon court, am I right Queen Serenity?" asked King Stephen. "Yes, and if you and Queen Gaia wouldn't mind, I'd like to have a word with them after introductions." "Of course you may."answered king Stephen. "Thank you." said queen Serenity. After a few minutes the introductions began."I'm Princess Serenity of the moon kingdom,it's a pleasure to meet all of you."Serena bowed low and as she looked up she gazed into the most beautiful eyes she had ever seen.A pool of midnight blue.As she scanned the rest of his body she was very pleased.'My lord,I never knew anyone could look so perfect' After the introductions she had found out his name was Prince Darien.'Even his name is nice' thought Serena with a glazed look over her eyes.A stern voice broke her out of her concentration. "Serena and Raye, I'm very disappointed in both of you.You know you shouldn't even act like that back on the Moon rather than here.And girls, you know when they're about to start,stop them!!"Queen Serenity was the closest to yelling they had ever herd her. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Outside the door "Iv'e never herd her that loud in my life"said a surprised Darien. "Man, she must be mad"said Jedite. "You can barely hear what she's saying now" muttered Malachite "Wonder how the girls are taking it" said Neflyte "Their probab,y used to it"commented Zoicite "On another note,who do you guys think is the cutest"pondered Darien "Raye"came Jedites reply "Lita"said Neflyte "Mina" Malachite said a little to love struck "Amy's cute" when Zoicite said this everyone started to give him weird looks."And she looks pretty smart to." he mumbeled. But it was already to late, they herd. "Well, who has the great Darien fallen for" said Zoicite trying to change the subject. "Serena has the most lovely eyes. I was stuck on them the whole time." "Awwwww, lil prince Darien's in love."teased Malachite ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ back in the throne room "What!"screamed Serena and Raye at the same time."Yes, you two will have two hours of fighting one-on-one since that's what you seemed to want to do earlier.And Mina, Lita, and Amy have to sit there with you while you do it.Sorry girls but maybe if you get mad at them they'll knock it off." "But I wanna tour the palace."moaned Serena "I wanted to meditate for a little bit."whinned Raye "You two shouldv'e thought about that befor you burst in here like that. Do you know how embarssing that was?"said Queen Serenity "Sorry mother" "Sorry my Queen" With that, the girls walked out of the room silently and went down to the arena.Don't think they didn't notice the five guys to their left, they were just to depressed to take notice of them...... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Like?Hate? whatcha think of this one.I made it a tad bit longer because I know I hate reading short stories.I'm gonna try to get chapter two out to and if it's there you'll know I did. Mail me at danielle.devlin@dol.net with flames, comments, questions, anything.Please send mail cause I wanna know who reads it and if I should keep doing it or not. Even if youv'e already written, give me some feed back on this chapter. Ja ne